I show my student this pointing out that it is a bit too busy, but it is what happens with a Shibui. This is why discerning just what should be brought forth and what should recede or be neutral is a part of the mix. Creating a horizon line helps. Working it with color will help to create depth. A darker foreground helps the image. Notice the flatness? This is not solved. (finished) Save these as examples if your an instructor and want them as references of expansion.
It may be that a triangle shape of color from the front to the figure by the moon will help solve this image.
Best wishes! Pejj